All Comments on 'I Have a Sister?'

great stuff. I hope you write more like it!!!!

Me Wants more!

nice work had me hard from the beginning keep up the good work and more chapters plz!

Well written - yes, good lenth for a story - yes, but dropping all these christmas hints ie tight christmas and jingle ball's etc etc it made the story sound cheap, i mean she's not been in the house for 10 mins and she's planning a mass family orgy.....two words describe alicia's character and the outcome of this story BULL SHIT

This story had some good parts to it but it needed alot of work. The dialogue wasn't believeable. Also there are alot of holes in the story line, especially near the end. And also the whole tuna thing was nasty. who would eat that out.

too fake

Don't give up your day job

I hope you write another part to this story.

Very nice change from the norm.

She sounds like my ex.

Trash the sister could have started off normal instead of being a slvt