All Comments on 'Into the Vampire's Lair Ch. 08'

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donaldedonaldeabout 13 years ago
great chapter

was fantastic chapter and i know you said you were going to be busy but i will be as patiently as possible waiting for the next chapter

mokkelkemokkelkeabout 13 years ago

even the final version is a joy to read :) i'm with don now, patiently waiting

sexynoisesturnmeonsexynoisesturnmeonabout 13 years ago
I like this Draven!!

although...I don't like that he just let his father take her. I do really enjoy this story, especially since Fiona "grew up"....LOL

apollonaapollonaabout 13 years ago
Ooooh, this is getting really good...

Loving the interaction and conflict. Such great, well defined characters. These vampires are very interesting indeed. Though Alaron does seem to have settled a little too much. His character was hilarious almost any time he opened his mouth, perfect for a little comic relief. After all that unpleasantness involving Fiona of course.

But it's this fiery she-wolf Amber and her mildly confused mate, Draven that I think are my favourites!

Great writing, and waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 13 years ago
What's up with Daddy Dearest?

With Amber's memories suppressed, who knows what Aramis may do to her short of killing her. She's not exactly in a great position to defend herself.

ArtFormArtFormabout 13 years agoAuthor
Little treat for you guys!

A draft of Chapter 9 is already on my blog but I have 2 possible directions for the story to head towards. So go take a look if you'd like and let me know which one you prefer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
let him marry amber. NOT someone else.

please, please, please don't marry him off to someone else and have a baby with them. let it be amber.

whatever is different about her is very interesting. i can't wait to hear more about it.

feel free to drag out the excitement and all that ( about marry) but don't marry him off. i beg of you.

nonnienonnieabout 13 years ago

I just never thought I would see Eian as the "betty crocker" alpha but that still makes me giggle! Being his first child and then being both were and vamp this will be a first not knowing what to expect and cant wait to see what kijnd of things they both will have to go through together for the baby that Fi has wanted so bad and now will finally get to have!

I hoped that some little bits of Amber would seep out and seems that some has I just cant wait to see what daddy dearest has to say to her alone and if this idea of trying to marry off draven to another woman will stop now. This is getting so go good and looking forward to when ur next ch comes out and everyone will be affected! Great job!

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 13 years ago

really a great chapter.

shortydeeshortydeeabout 13 years ago
Need To Know

How long will it be before the next chaper is posted? Please let Darven's father bring back her memory. It is about time he stood up to the old man...LOL

mikothebabymikothebabyabout 13 years ago
awesome

I am really loving this story and your twists and turns. Leading us to believe Draven would leave and go back to service with the council - but then he takes Amber back to his Dad. And Eian reduced to a acting like a puppy instead of the big Alpha male. I never know what to expect from you - and that makes me come back for more. thanks

maria40maria40about 13 years ago
lol

can't wait for more. I just wish amber had her memories.

catman71catman71about 13 years ago
its going to be

a wild ride, and i do no think there are enough seatbelts

Chuckles437Chuckles437about 13 years ago
Holy Chit Batman!

What a fine kettle of fish you got us in now :) I got behind on this story somehow...so have read it all to catch up...loving it!!! Looking forward to the MORE factor....

goodwillmagicgoodwillmagicabout 13 years ago
Talk about hitting the fan!

Nice chapter. Did not want to end and left us wanting MORE! TY maam, may we have another? : )

warmicw30warmicw30about 13 years ago
beautiful

beautiful written.

canndcanndalmost 13 years ago

Catman said it best. A wild ride! It has me at the edge of my seat experiencing many emotions right along with the characters. YOu have me stumped with Aramis. I don't trust him at all and his behavior has me confused. Why did Draven not attempt to have Fiona help with the memories. He should know she'd be happy to undo this situation.

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