by My Erotic Tail
A cliff-hanger type. Could have been edited better, though. I think I will read the other stories about Josh.
Deftly handled. You have a very nice, easy touch. Sack's right though. It could have gone a little further. I wanted to know if there was going to be any more asshole-poking.
I wish you had extended this a little. Has good characters that deserve more fleshing out. Otherwise, a stroke of genius! Good luck!!
You've got a great character in Josh. Well crafter story and a good read. It should do well in the contest.
Rumple Foreskin
I will be reading more of Josh's tales. Funny story Art...good luck!
My first ever Josh story...I intend to read more. Very interesting tale ~ makes one wonder....
Honey123