by nakedjohn
Where does Katie go from here? Think this character could be developed some more. Hope she shows up again & soon in new stories!
It's not bad at all. You build it up and use the framing device well. Some problems are glaring, however. "4 Ultra-Hot college guys" made me wince. It's good for what it is though, a simple X-rated short story.
the story was excellent ....a part two would be nice. Keep up the good work