All Comments on 'Kiss of Death'

clever...creative...very nice...

hugh

This story kept me smiling all the way through it. I've read many children's spooky stories; it was much fun to read an x-rated one. The story had good pace to it, not a word wasted....and it had some special eroticism to it as well....with the this reader feeling the heat of erotic passion (and its satiation for the woman and the man) through its words.

Amusing but kinda mean of him. Had me on the edge of my seat. I was trying to work out if it was a prank or if you really were going for death.

Very good!

Amusing but kinda mean of him. Had me on the edge of my seat. I was trying to work out if it was a prank or if you really were going for death.

Very good!

Amusing but kinda mean of him. Had me on the edge of my seat. I was trying to work out if it was a prank or if you really were going for death.

Very good!