by VFR1944
Title says it all
I am looking forward to reading the other installments. Just wanted to comment and let you know it was a great story. Good job!
your comments are malicious. Better yet, if you can write a better story, do so. Other wise keep your comments to your self. I am sure the author needs them like he needs a hole in the head.
VFR 1994, sounds just like my experiences in the drive in theaters in the 60's too...
Ignore the morons who have nothing better to do than to slam others.
I look forward to the next installment.
sounds like how things went on double dates 10 yrs later.. where else could one park for hours and not be bothered.
This is not the worst story I have read in this section and I have read a lot worse. The one thing a like about the story it happened before the sexual revolution and it gave a small glimpse into what life was like. Another aspect that I like was the story was short. With that said the drawback to this story, a lot of time is spent on irrelevant information surrounding the date (e.g. movie saw). Instead I would have liked to have known more about Peggy, Sue, and Carl including if the four of you had a foursome together. In any event, I feel this is a good attempt and feel there is a lot that can be improved.
If you would have you would have noted the period of American past time in the '50s and '60s.... Check with your parents or grandparents as to way of times when they were teens...