All Comments on 'Melanie & Me in the Haunted House'

Great story, Boxlicker although maybe a little overdone. As I read about the strapon in your ass, I could feel it in mine. I wished it hadn't been just my imagination.

Very hot & expertly written. I've had a dildo in my ass, and it was exactly like in the story. This made me want to get fucked again!

Maybe a sequel in the future, where the GF actually joins in?

Great entry. Good luck. Sizzling action.

Great story. However, I think you have some body parts mixed up. You wrote several times that George's clit was giving him pleasure. Um, guys don't have clits. I had to re-read that part of the story several times to be sure that I wasn't reading it wrong. Besides that...awesome story! Maybe you could have gotten the niece involved with Alice or some other way....

De-tailed well...(he he he ) Very vivid and an excellent story, Good Luck (*_*) Happy Halloween

WOW! I don't think I've ever read a story where the sex description is 90% of the story. So much for character development! Still, this is a steamy masturbation tale that is sure to please! Good luck!

If you can ever figure out how to work in a little more sex--it'll be a (what else?) fucking miracle. A hot, fun read Box.

Rumple

You have always claimed you write only smut. Taking you at your word, I have never read anything by you, as I like a little more story. Three lit pagesof nearly total sex is, imho, an accomplishment of the highest (or lowest) magnitude.

It was a fun read box, thank you for sharing :0

-Colly

I don’t think I had time to breath with all the sex in this story, excellent read, truly enjoyed it! Thanks Lady Lay

A nice twist on an old theme. Gives haunting a good name.

"I had never eaten Alice's pussy before, besides the fact that she was dead ...." Says it all.

Very entertaining read, Box. ~Imp

Wow, loved this story. Very detailed and vivid. I felt like I was watching from somewhere in the room.

Good job.

This story was really hot and I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing it and keep up the good work.

~Lost

Wow! I've never liked ghost stories like this before but this is sexy

Great writing. Love your story.

Not wanting add yet another med to my list, I did a lot of research and found a lot of positive things being said for manual prostate massage.

I've never been real interested in anal with women I've been with, though some of them were and I did what I could for them, so I'd never really considered anything going in mine. Was that ever an oversight on my part!

I now have numerous toys and vibrators and my wife enjoys driving me as crazy sexually as I do her when I lick her to orgasm. She's even begun to explore her own backdoor.

It's unfortunate our society has been so homophobic for so long; there is no doubt societal mores and opinions prevented me from experiencing a tremendous amount of pleasure earlier in my life.

As much as I derive intense pleasure from anal and prostate stimulation, I'm not suddenly attracted to men; I'm still gaga over the female form, smell & taste. (So much for societal wisdom.) I just like my female playmates to be open minded about ass play.

I will admit I have thought about a vacation to Brazil, though ;)-

Since it seems Box has either retired or is no longer with us, pointing out the miscue regarding the prostate is not really for his benefit. The nickname the prostate has gained is actually the 'male g-spot', not the clit.

Oh, on a related note. To all you fellow prostate sufferers, I have discovered a funny and somewhat ironic secondary use for Viagra; it eases my prostate related urination problems almost completely. I take small amounts on a regular basis and can pee again! Consult a urologist!

Great story and I have read it several times, Quite frankly George is a really lucky guy. I'll bet he is hoping the Neice inherited the aunts appitites as well as the house. Great story.

different story then many you read in here

but lovely good sence of writing