by NakdSalr
you left us hanging so long,please don't forget your fans this long again.great story keep it up(smile).
All your stories were told exquistely. You just have the talent.
Loved this story. Hope that you continue this one, as well as your "Mom Takes a Ride" story! Thanks!
your stories all can have more chapters the way you write them which is good.the son with carrie and cindy should be explored.make them his private sluts.
please follow this up. i love this series you have started and cant wait for CH. 6.
keep up the good work
and writers that can't write,want to write all the time.you write with the best of the writers on this site,why not write more.
Sad that it seems you have finished this super tale. I'm sure such good writing takes a lot of valuable time, but just read through the comments your stories have attracted and know that you have a very appreciative and loyal audience waiting with bated breath for your next chapter - Please? Thanks again for a terrific story.
You have done a wonderful job of bringing Jill and Tim along to this point. Their relationship would be tested by a pregnancy....please!
What a wonderful series! I was hard and wet many times. Your writing is very good. Please continue with more chapters. Another chapter to " Mom Takes A Ride " would be great also! Thanks for the stories. RAY.
Well I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read yet! Im hoping there is more to this story. It would be great to have mom become his personal slut, begging for his cock to fill her asshole every day and drinking his cum daily! Then she can set up her freinds to fuck him and become both of there cumslut slaves. Mom and son using them to seduce her husband and blackmail him into supporting them. But with him as well being under mom and sons control and then the son gets to sleep with mom all the time and dad is a cuckold to son and mom, at which point if you wanted they could make dad a gay cocksucking slave
that is the best story i have ever read please continue let them get pregnant it is possible tied tubs have failed it would be so hot and cindy could get preg too please
I don't want to see Mom pregnant, Tim needs a little Cindy and her daughter. Maybe one of his Annt's.
Thank you for Writing Them..
love the build up to the anal sex...mother reluctance..son humping her ass every chance he got..finally taking her ass which is the best part of incest sex.
What a wonderful series! Please continue with more chapters.
This is a moving and sensually written piece. It is also very believable. I kept your interest and always gave more.
Cannot count number of times I masturbated to this story. all the different facets of storyline are hot.
this is making my pussy throb like hell, i wish someone like tim would fuck ME right now.
ONE OF THE HOTTEST AND SEXUALLY STIMULATING. THE WRITER IS OUTSTANDING IN HIS WRITING AT BEING ABLE TO GET ME HOT THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE STORY. I WANT TO READ MORE OF HIS STORIES, SINCE I SEE HE HASN'T WRITTEN ANY MORE SINCE 05.
This series was hott!!! I agree with other posters, we need to either see mom become his slut, or action including the aforemention aunt or best freind Carrie. I enjoyed this emensly.
One of the hottest mother/son incest series on this site. I hope (not much since it's been so long) we get more chapters one day...
Keep going, I'd like to read about him, his mom and her friends!
I made me so hard I think I need to join in and I could fuck that pussy wile he fucks your ass mommy
Only found you yesterday read everything you've written in 2 sittings. Well written, great characters, good story line just a great piece of writing well done. You got to get Cindy in on the act i'm thinking mom catches Tim and Cindy up to no good an rapes both of them ? Well i got to go i've leaked about a quart of precum in my boxers needs a shower. lol Again great read thankyou. I'll be looking for you sequel. regards Puremagic.
you know what ? Jim shoud fuck Cindy too that s unfair he must fuck her!! and u r great ok? that s the best erotic story i v ever read keep writing !!!!!
This story must be the greatest incest story on here i felt the greatest feeling of guilty pleasure reading this. PLEASE MAKE MORE!
love your story wish there were more moves out there to see like that i have jack off at least 4 time read your story
and really enjoyed reading it - well done - hope you have other stories to offer us?
This is a favorite fantasy of mine, and you hit every single point of what's in my head! LOVED the detail description, the reluctance at first and then giving in to wild sexual depravity. 5 stars for sure...I'm dehydrated now!
Great series! Only wish I have, is that you had continued it.
That was an awesome series. Here's hoping his mother allows him to fuck Carrie and Cindy
Dear Nakdsalr,
WoW! What a lovely story - how well told! I could actually see n feel Jill's ass!
Keep writing!
Suzy
oooh! One can feel Jill's ass getting oiled, rubbed & finally, fucked! Wonderful story
Going by the comments made, everyone loved the story. It was beautiful. Why didn't you include the 'completion' so we could share in and enjoy their fulfillment?
You are one sick motherf*cker, and I mean that as a complement. I Know that I'm five years and several comments late but where's chapter 6?
This story and Mom takes a Ride are all-time erotic classics, wonderfull stuff!
I LOVED your writing. I miss my Mom and sure wish we could have done all this before she passed away..... Came very close but she was worried about getting pregnant.
Love the story, had me dripping the whole time. Where is chapter6,7,8,9?
My goodness what a beautifully sexy story, I loved it and I even ended picturing myself in Jill's place with a horny son. it was an enjoyable read and made me so beautifully wet, thank you.
Kim, From UK
ktslips@yahoo.co.uk
Caught the imagination straight away was standing proud nearly all through
Waiting for number 6. Jill made me cum to good to be true.
wish i had grown up with a mother like that,,,i was thoroughly engrossed in every word of this story,,,picturing it all in my minds eye,,,how truly erotic!! very satisfying,,want more like this please!
Just love this series because of the nature in the relationship, and also how the 2 leads interact, back and forth, along with descriptive action. Would love to see this series extended.
One of the best stories in the incest/taboo genre. Would be truly grateful if you added more. Please change nothing about your style and maintain the character's true personalities throughout, as you have done already.
Loved the whole reaching for the cereal thing - think I could become a morning person after all!!!;o))
This is absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read. My cock is hard and I cannot wait for my wife to appear with her mom. I may fuck both of them I am so hard and my mind is so fucked up with sex. I think that a 3-way with Cindy is a good idea.
AMAZING!FABULOUS!Well written story.I had an hard on since the 1st chapter to the last one.Keep on writing on this mom/son exciting story.
No threesome have Jill shave her pussy. Get rid of the dad. Write more longer much longer chapters.
I need at least one more chapter! plsssssssssssssssssssss!!!! I absolutely loved your story,the sad part is having to come back to reality after having read it :(
that it's finished!!! Please write more, I came pretty much every chapter and only once because it was short.
Excellent story telling, excellent idea, excellent slut!! Go on and write some more, and make it longer if possible please...
This is by far thee most greatest sex story I have ever read. I came on every sex scene the first time I read it. It was great. Please make more! I need to see what happens next!!!
do you think you could write a story with Tim having sex with his mother, Cindy and Carrie? hope you think it over? later
The incestuous mother's needs grew to a great pleasure of having her own young son's passionate penis deep in the anus,all the sperm she enjoyed in her wet wanton vagina was nice. Now, however she knew the tightening of her ass around her son's enormous cock in her need to seduce him better would enhance his incestuously motherfucking orgasmic endeavor very snugly in her taut ass. She began slowly. "oh son, do try to slide your hard penis in mommies tight anus sugar." Yes Mom, I'll try, but won't it hurt?" "Yes, a bit do put some of that lubricant on your penis and I'll stroke it . Mmmm! Yes Mom! She stroked the now slippery cock to a nice hard shaft. Now, slowly fuck Mom's ass, I need it honey,PLEASE! OK, HE slid about two inches in her opening. DEEPER SON! Then, with a single thrust he slid his incestuous penis in his own mother's anus as she squealed loudly!
love to hear mom say cunt great story im as jealous as fuck my mom such a prude
This sounds like a spoiled eighteen year old boy, too impatient. She gave him an inch and he demanded the whole yard not caring if anyone saw them.
Great story all the same.
I've been a fan on this site for almost 4 years and this is the best storie I've ever read. This needs to be adapted into an anime, hentai or have another chapter posted I'm in favour of 'personal slut'.
Don't leave us hanging like "filled for years to come" sounds like!
i would have loved to do that with my mom and her 36d"s i played with them a few times but never got to fuck her
really erotic story, loved how it built and how sexy the Mom was and how the sex progressed-love to see ch 06, with Cindy thrown in the mix-
well written thanks
would love to read what happens next between son and mom and if she really does let her son fuck Cindy and Carrie
The sudden, totally unexpected and definitely unnessary introduction of Cindy into the story will ruin it for me, although nothing untoward has yet happened. Jill's husband Thomas unexpectedly arriving home did add an element of excitement and suspense--to the already useless drama of Cindy being there--did create concern that he might discover his wife and son were now lovers!!
Now with the inclusion of their often-promised future shit-fucking, and mother Jill promising her son that Jill's two non-incestual female best friends would be allowed to turn their affair into a brothel means any future adventures of this story should change the category to Group Sex, Bi-sexual and Lesbianism--rather than continue as the category of Incest.
Loved the story and can't wait for more. Hope it includes Cindy. Makes me hard every time I read it.
sexy story I got to fuck my mom once after we had a few drinks I spewed her womb with my fertile seed and she became pregnant. I was just cumming and my mom screaming when my sister walked in on us asking what is going on. mom explained and I took her virginity to and for a second time that evening I spewed rope after rope of man seed into my sister they both will download their" my babies" with in a few weeks. I intend to make another pair with both of them they both agreed. dad wasn't happy but all he cases about is his golf and brandy so let's leave him out of the question.
I would like to read more of mom drinking her son's prick juice, gargling with it and showing it to him with her mouth open, then drinking it down. more read with mom's unshaven cunt. love the hair cuntal lips, more cum dripping from her mouth and chin. more fuck talk, i.e., it turns me on too.
Wish there were more chapters and get Carrie involved as well. Very hot series.
where and when is the next installment in this fantastic story going to appear pretty soon i hope
Wow you should really consider continuing this series, PLEASE ! ? ! ?
You started by telling us they were going to have a full week to explore and build their new relationship. But almost as quickly as it started Cindy interrupts them and dad is back home. What happened?
i loved them all , i hope u do more , i have never thought of fucking my mother but i have now , its a shame she isnt with us and never read this a few years back , but i can still think about it , your writing is excellent , i hope to read more ...Mark
You know its a damn good story when you blow your load on chapter 4, and decide to keep reading chapter 5, covered in your own sticky mess. Awesome series, excellent writing. I hope this series continues.
My cousin came in and caught me reading this with my dick in my hand.After she sucked and played with it she sat on my lap with my dick in her ass and gave me the fuck of my life.
Wars have been fought in less time that it took Tim to fuck his mom... Good story; but it could have been told in one installment...not five.
A great read and and 5 installments ar'ent really enough, would love to read more about these two and there continuing adventures. Well done. wiltonboy
Thank you for writing. A lot of us enjoyed it.
the writing style is different it seems. liked the previous 4 chapters to this one. was ok tho, still hot.
What a fine conclusion to this part of the Jill & Tim story -- with Tim giving his mom a triple dose of ass-fucking, and Jill loving every second of it. It was the best description of an ass job I ever read. It seems you have come to the end of this tale, but it surely deserved an encore story, one that took Tim from his mom's loving arms into her two friends, Cindy and Carrie. So many possibilities there, for twosomes, trios and quarto super-fucks. Hope you have time in the future to continue the story, including the many new opportunities that remained for Jill and Tim to consummate their love. Good Writing, and THANX!
PapaGolf
That made my pussy throb nonstop. I have it read 10 times and each time it made my pussy wet. My hand just won't do.
Mom likes to lock her legs around me when we're doing missionary position. She doesn't get me any deeper, but I like to feel her heels against my ass when I cum.