All Comments on 'Nurse Mom'

Well worth having the accident ! I am sure most men go through a phase when their mother (and Aunts) become the centre of their sexual feelings. But few actually get the chance to fulfill their fantasy. Really enjoyed this story, thanks for writing it.

was worth the read..thanks again...

Manny you wrote another great story. I love the way he described the mother took care of the son while he was in the hospital. I also like the way you described the sex between them during the lightning storm.

I have read several of your stories and I like this one the best by far. A bit long to be read at one reading, and that bothered me bit I got off anyway. Thanks for the fuel.

Although he married twins, I think he would have been happier with his mom. I think Mom would have been a perfect wife for him and if she would have given him the chance he would have been the perfect husband for her. Even with the age difference, they could have had 30 good years or more of sex and could have enjoyed their latter years of life with one an another. Thanks for the good story.......Rich

The only sad thing about this story was the ending of the relationship with his mom. It was an alternative ending going with Val and the twins, but for me I would have preferred that they had stayed together, it was somewhat saddening that it had to end, but that as they say is, Imho.

Thank you for a very well written story and I like the way it draws the reader in. Congrats, there are only a very few story witers on this site that can actually do this, your an elite group.

Much as I love happily-ever-after mother-son liaisons, I must admit stories of the tender affair that allows both to have fuller lives afterward is a little bit closer to reality and gives a certain bittersweet flavor to the story. A lush feast for the reader!

Hi, I think your story was very good. I would have left the aunt out or had him visit her alone. Great job!

Is the author

Many Feathers the same as Thesandman?

if not, this story has been posted before on storiesonline.net.

Author pls clearify.

You'll notice I make reference to myself as Thesandman.

And anyone who knows me and knows my history, I am indeed one in the same person.

A little to long for the story line.

Excellent story..honestly one of the best I've read so far

This story is top 3 of the hundreds I've read here. Engaging, erotic, caring and quite tasty throughout. By far the best read I've had on literotica this year and, to date, the first one that I've considered worthy of my comments in praise.

Fantastic

thank you so much

I told love the sex scenes you wrote, the build up the get together and the relatively logical ending. That's really a great read I am surprised that you are not getting more reviews.

I enjoyed this story a lot. It was a pity that Brian and his mother decided to stop their affair once he had recovered, but the ending worked alright. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

once again I couldnt stop reading your stories. love your writing from start to finish and though totally disabled and can sit for 24 hrs reading lol.I pass out and wake up continuing the story. I dont comment always since it hurts to much to type , but I always relate to a person in your writings.. ty for your stories , they have kept me company many nights and days.. ok 20 min to type this , I must stop pain is to much ty tho again./ bill / 7 younger sisters and a loving mother and my own vivid imaginations as growing up in my family in the 60,s wow lol.

Considering the limited sex details it could have been a couple pages less and the aunt and cousins should've been a separate story. Better than some other efforts anyway.

A nurse with all the right moves to help her son, a little long but a nice read. keep your stories cumming .........................LAROC

Very hot and very well written! I loved the build up to the sex. A sequel with more information about his threeway marriage would have been great.

5 STARS (5.0/5.0 = A+)

Bravissimo!

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The story does NOT need editing because everybody and his brother understand he finds his mom irresistibly sexually appealing to the point of going nuts. No amount of punctuation could help him. But his mom could & did!

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NO WOMAN CAN GIVE YOU MORE PLEASURE THAN YOUR MOTHER!

Yes, I think Bravissimo (the name I've chosen for the previous commentor) is absolutely right, mostly. No woman can love a man like his mother. And vice-versa. Only a son can love a woman as much as she deserves. Not her husband, not any other lover. After all, he has known her all of his life. Unlike a husband who only marries her usually at or about 18. She is, also, the most important woman in his life from birth. Nurse Mom did a good thing for him, though she was mistaken in that she ended it. They could have had many years of satisfying love making even after his marriage to the twins. By the way, the Twins story with him shouldn't be another chapter but a separate story. As it is anyway. His three-way marriage with Val joining in when she comes to visit her children and grandchildren. But. Many Feathers, Bravissimo is incorrect in one thing: you do need to have your stories proofread for spelling and punctuation. It is distracting for the reader. BRAVISSIMO!

I am so wet from this.

Love it like I do all of your stories! Thank you!

One of the hottest stories ever

Sad to see it end.

Great story !!!

Last page KILLED it for me. it's just another fuck story... a lesbo affair IS CHEATING!!!

Loved this story not sure about the ending but it is what it is....

Mother and Son, most of the time there ok. But this was outstanding. I like how mom was such a pro at frist, then it got hot....Nice work THANKS

I couldn't not be irritated by the fact that he can't use his arms, but on more than one occasion the nurse handed him pills and once a glass of water.

Otherwise, nice story.

ON READ #2 ,THIS STORY CHANGED,

IT SEEMED TO GET HOTTER.

..THANKS AGAIN..

Not the ending i was hoping to read

Excellent story. This is the first story written by you that I have read. Hopefully your other 400+ works are half as good as this one. I plan to find out.

I thought the story was really great up until the final get together. I was really hoping that the mother would have come to her senses by then. I can understand the mother bring Val in for a threesome with her son, after all, they had talked about him many times previously. But then to admit to having an affair with Val during her entire marriage and saying "we didnt see it as cheating" was ridiculous. I am 100% certain that her late husband would have considered that cheating. I also personally think that the stopping of their 'relationship' was the wrong way to end the story. Especially after reading that he obviously never found the same kind of love again that he had with his mother. (And I am certain that the mother never again found anything close to the relationship she had with her son either). Just my 2¢, otherwise it was an engaging read.

5 stars. HOWEVER; I agree with others that mother and son should have stayed together. Val and the twins headed the story downhill (IMO).

Utter bullshit, stopped reading after page 3. While the premise of the story is great, your writing skills are absolutely horrible. Using insane amount of words to describe simple situation so much so that the entire feel of erotica would be lost in trying to completely read the mumbo jumbo of words that were describing the situation. In addition, the repeated and over usage of words like 'even', 'though' in lousy attempts to heighten the reading pleasure & intensity would often end up having quite the opposite effects. Last but no least same annoying habit as most others writers here: writing entire paragraphs referring to mother as 'she', 'her' It just douses that unique sizzling intensity that is the best part of reading a mother-son incest erotica. No more than 2 stars due to these critical shortcomings.

I liked this story. i thought the ending was just the way it should have been.

Well done! You are really a writer.

I liked the story, but not the ending.

I think it could have turned out much better if his mother had experienced a change of heart, and realised that she'd fallen in love with her son, and wanted to continue the intimacy.

I think it could've worked out fine.

Sincerely,

B4PW.

lame ending