by Unbridled_Passion
Liked the tone of the whole story, and the idea of the arrow placement having an effect on the outcome. Funny and well done! Good luck in the contest!
Dark/Les Lumens
Poor Cupid! Well done, thoroughly enjoyed the humour of this well written story.
I think I would rather be hit up by Anteros than Cupid! Love the humor. Good luck!
a delightful read... witty, humorous, charming and <grin erotically pleasing. (~_*)The use of the whole family wraps this story tightly and I am not against Anteros working on Valentines day 'AGAIN' <bigrin.
This story has been selected for the New Story Reviews on the Lit Forum Author's Hangout.