by RomanCEisdead2
Thanks for a good satire on a fairy tale. Get ready for the freaks out there decrying you for corrupting a children's tale.
Good job with a nice twist making the PI into the Prince.
PW
I did not initially occur to me that the PI was "the prince" because I was enjoying the story so much ... magnificently written! And ofcourse a vet is a "doctor". Excellent parady, although I enjoyed the writing more from the standpoint of a good read. Thank you.
Keep it up. My only problem was that it was so long. However I don't see how it could be shortened and still be as good.
Really great story! It was funny and sexy and a little bit of a thriller all at the same time. I really enjoyed it!
hahaha corny story :P:P allthough still quite good keep up the good work ;)
Very interesting stories - I assume it was fiction/
Realy enjoyed it
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the real make over and the step by step relevation to the legend of snow white...
i have never read so long story but this one keep on captivating my thoughts untill and unless i had read the final orgasm ( climax whatever )...
the chapter by chapter made the proper sense and it not only made it simple and easy to read . Hats anf pants off ...
I loved it, erotic, satirical, sexy. I am ready to keep hearing about Snow's continuing liaison with the Seven bros. This story really could go on for a century. Well Done!