by Bazzza
Good story, with interesting characters and erotic situations. It needs editing by someone for punctuation and grammar (I/me), but is still a very good read. I look forward to reading more of this writer's submissions.
I loved the start of the story with the friend Jamie. I love stories when couples experiment a bit but keep limits on adventure. I find that more erotic sometimes then all out sex.
I personally would have prefered the contact with jamie continue over time. I wasnt crazy about the direction of the story after that.
Good and sexy overall
keep writing\
Jackie
what possible limit can there be now?
She can fuck anyone she likes.
Wimpy won't stop her.
Nice story, but really can't see this in loving wifes, Sex for money is where she is headed. this is more of a group thing, slut wife talks hubby into just one time... feels a little guilty so she lets him have 3 some with girlfriend. Now she can have as much sex make as much money as she wants. And he wasn't lisening to Max talk about sex for money just to be polite was she
Nice story, but really can't see this in loving wifes, Sex for money is where she is headed. this is more of a group thing, slut wife talks hubby into just one time... feels a little guilty so she lets him have 3 some with girlfriend. Now she can have as much sex make as much money as she wants. And he wasn't lisening to Max talk about sex for money just to be polite was she
Georgia had a mind of her own and Jamie got real good at what he was doing, it was only a matter of time before he started fucking her. Max got his money's worth, but he had to share her. Georgia is into helping her husband's peace of mind.
I have to admit that this author has range.
The story of his that I read just previously was very good -- I gave it a 5.
But this one? Not even close -- 2 **
Even drunk that was a seriously brain damaged bitch when his friend was around.
Sorry closet boy this has epic fail spewed all over it.