All Comments on 'Taking Charge Ch. 01'

I hope,you have plans to add a few more chapters to this story.I enjoyed reading it immensely!

I really enjoyed this and can't wait to see where you take it next.

Loved the sex, loved the cruelty, loved the inventive background to the main character. Would like it even more if you spent more time on his thinking, planning and decision making, with fewer instances of "my gut took over." Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was...enticing.

Thank you.

Very well written work, intense and delicious. It's heavy enough on pain to perhaps put off the faint-hearted, but the action, dialogue, and descriptions are excellent and stirring.

really hot! brutal, though... this is one of those stories that i fantasize about but would not want to experience!

I loved this. I hope you write more!!

Wow....this was amazing! If only there where more 20 something year olds out there that knew how to be this confident with a woman one minute and then still be Romeo afterwards. I'm 23 and I still have not found him. This was amazing.

He fell off his medications and went nuts? Bah!

I hope you plan on writing more and consider getting published. Seems like a lot of thought went into this and I really like the background that went into it. Gave it some substance.

Can actually picture it all happening, it flowed really well and was incredibly hot!

Perfect!!!

To THINK that this is over a decade old and I'm just reading it! Only 2 stories written/submitted/shared!! Unreal!!