All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 09'

I have been waiting 4eva. great story I like the premise

Thank You.

nice chapter

beautiful

Glad to see this story getting back on track. I was worried it was going to be another unfinished masterpiece on this site.

I am absolutely intent on finishing the story. I just had a whole bunch of life-stuff show up this summer that distracted me.

But the ideas are still there and the story will out.

Thanks for your patience.

@XavierTorch

I really like how you developed this story line. Write on!

Things are moving forward! Go, Talla, go! My only complaint is that I have to wait for more!

Thanks for writing.

It's out for editing and, yes, it's longer than usual.

Xav.

Up the rebellion! Looking forward to what happens next.

Heh, take out the porn and just use vague half mentioned scenes or less descritive scenes to put it into the fantasy category and not the erotic one and you could publish this, it would need alot more work etc of course and it would have to be expanded, but you have a good basis for work and a female dominant society would provide for interesting reading to most people.Of course the exact reason for why they are dominant may have to be changed etc but yeah, awesome original idea...good job man, you make other authors like me slightly jealous of some of your awesome ideas =p