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"Right," Talla replied. "Here."
It had been tucked into her skirt, folded up between the pleats.
"I hope he can read it."
"He can," Talla said. "I know he knows every word in it."
"Good. I'll be in touch as soon as I can."
One last touch, hand to hand, and Talla raced off.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoHeh, take out the porn and just use vague half mentioned scenes or less descritive scenes to put it into the fantasy category and not the erotic one and you could publish this, it would need alot more work etc of course and it would have to be expanded, but you have a good basis for work and a female dominant society would provide for interesting reading to most people.Of course the exact reason for why they are dominant may have to be changed etc but yeah, awesome original idea...good job man, you make other authors like me slightly jealous of some of your awesome ideas =p
xtorchover 11 years agoAuthorIt's out for editing and, yes, it's longer than usual.
Xav.
cantfightfateover 11 years agoThings are moving forward! Go, Talla, go! My only complaint is that I have to wait for more!
Thanks for writing.
