by vampwrrr
Hghly charged, romantic, erotic, emotionally touching, superbly written! You are an artist!
Gaelic AND Neruda? This is my new favorite! Totally love it.
(but now please go finish Riding the Red... My other favorite!)
Seriously, your pace - and patience - is so exquisite here. Beautifully done.
Erotic...in the true sense of the word.
Get an editor to catch typos and you'll reach an elusive, pure 5.0.
(Oh...and very few women wear 5 inch heals for a day of shopping and picnicking. Save that for dinner or a particularly savory lunch. She's an educated, sexy woman, give her street smarts too.)
I would like to see another adventure from this couple.
Loved the way he got her to her first orgasm with him. Could feel the love between them just reading the story. Can only wish I get someone like Winter. Life would be so much better with a partner like her, no lack of love and support!
What the hell was he doing in their relationship before they got married if she never had an orgasm before? And why only bring it up when they were married and not before?
Finally a story where partners chose to wait till marriage. So rare in current era