All Comments on 'The Element of Fear'

It was damned creepy, full of tension, and very well done. Good luck in the contest!

A well crafted tale of menace and terror. Excellent imagery.

Good luck in the contest.

This story left me breathless. You've mastered writing of fear, like no other. Thanks.

Your story was incredible!!! It is more aggressive than I usually get into but I just couldn't stop reading, very impressive! Erotic and scary. One can easily step inside this story. I hope you two continue to write many stories together. Good Luck!

I did not realize I was holding my breath until the end..when I released a long deep breath. This is an amazing work.

That was straight out of stephen king.. fantastic writing!

This is awesome read! This is what I really call NC/R. I hope you win this contest. Eerily, psychologically mesmerizing.

Thanks for such a fantastic read!

Kerry Leland

very scary and disturbing! Well done to both of you.

Different. Very different. Love the Shakespeare bit. Great job!

After Monster, I was anticipating something equally dark for Valentine's Day. I wasn't disappointed. Munachi, Perfect . . . you two make an excellent team.

I just hope I never meet you two alone . . .

The tension build up was very intense. Very interesting story - well done.

Publish this. Seriously. Amazing. *shudder*

This story is absolutely awesome. Really great build-up, and the part about the chocolates was very well written. Thanks so much for posting this one!

Creepy, sick and twisted. Please write a sequel!

tense, chilling, disturbing ... I hope to never be on either of your Valentine's Card lists. What a team you two make. Tremendous story!

I had to stop writing in the middle of the story as I almost was too late for work...

I tell you I was deeply distracted...

It's such a well-written story, but oh-so-disturbing.... I think, I have to think about a better firewall now...

Write a sequel! Pleease!! And he doesn't mean he'll kill her if she uses the safe word, does he?? That wouldn't be any fun... he's truly crazy, though

Unreal, sick, twisted....good writing, but i hope nobody out there follows this guys lead.

I've read a lot of stories like this but none have made me light headed like this one! It has all the ideas that make my lady parts twitch!

Very well done

This story is just so perfect!

All of my darkest fantasies in one story!

This story is seriously underrated. I've come back to read it again and again, and love it more each time. I'd love for it to be made into a movie. 😍 It deserves a wayyy higher rating.