All Comments on 'The First Valentine: Historical'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Superb!

Very well written. I wish you had detailed the love making scene with Licia. The scene with Julia was well done with her disappearance at daylight reinforcing the idea that Julia was a figment of his imagination.

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