All Comments on 'The Perfect Game Ch. 03'

Fantastic!!!

been waiting a long time for this one and I wasn't disapointed!!! keep on writing !!!

Very hot story - thank you!

Loved it... well worth the wait..

~

Gary

Very well done... you have to continue... one suggestion, though: there needs to be nore aprehension / seduction.The best part of the first one was the should we / shouldn't we part... more new characters would help, particularly male characters.

I have to say this first, you are one hell of a story teller. I have read all of this story and hope you add more to it. I also have read others on your list and have not been disappointed at all. Well done!

One of the most creative stories I have read. Truly excellent, well written. Please continue.

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. it builds up very nicely and keeps going and going. very well and intelligently written. you have a serious talent my friend dont stop :)

This story was one of the best stories I have ever read! I can't wait for chapter 4!

That series was so hot. Please write more.

I want to know if you have actually made the game and where can I get a copy. lol

Your next submission needs to be the game rules and a list of all the cards. Seriously.

You should sell the rights for a movie...this is amazing, best online by far.

Your game's probability depend's on the full cooperation of an adventurous, licentious and polyamorous mate, who enjoys your sexual exploits, stamina and creativity. Nevertheless, if only my wife were open to such exploration!

Thank you, at least, for the fantasy of being that one guy who satisfies four.

One of the best on the site!

When can we expect Chapter 4? When do the co-workers finally come over?

These only get better.

Seriously where can we get a copy of this? Take it to Parker Brothers and get it published!

Still waiting for the next chapter...

Its awesome.Pls cont to write another chapter wid 7 ppl atleast

This is the best series on this site. Please continue it!

This is by far the best series I've ever read on here, you do plan on continuing, right?

And I bet if you made this game into a reality, you could make a lot of money off of it.

Best. Drinking game. Ever.

It wouldn't be that hard to make either; I probably will.

Is Your last name McDonald? 'Cause, Baby , I lovin' You! ;')) ... Please, Sir, ...Don't stop...!

Unless Tx objects, the fans can collaborate to make this game, please see my comment after ch1.

I NEED to get a copy of this game. My girlfriend and I have our sights set on an orgy with our two best friends, but so far the closest we've gotten was fucking while they were fucking next to us. I think this game could bridge the gap!

OMG!!!!! I just finger fucked myself while reading this. I came over and over, it made me so fucking horny! I need someone to eat my pussy right now!!! This was amazing, please keep writing so that I can keep cumming!!!!!!

Ending lacked the in depth detail the rest of the story had. It seemed to just go flat.

Hey Tex, don't apologize for all the detail you start out with. You do an incredible job of building background which is very relevant to the story. The detail is fantastic and the pace of the action is very good. You do a great job of adding comments and thoughts which help a normal reader relate and place himself in the situation you are describing. The little hiccups that you add in, like an unexpected guest, are very well played out after some initial disappointment by those expecting different circumstances that they feel like they are controlling, but of course can't. Anne was a treat as was the tease of having Cheryl go to a college party without Alex. Now make sure you don't leave us hanging waiting for Frank and Delara, woof woof. Unbelievable effort.

One of the best series I have read on here. Cant wait for the next installment when you finally get the other friends mentioned at the beginning of this segment involved, hopefully with all the previous participants still there.

Please write the next one with the boosters, more friends and maybe a hung male co-ed for cheryl to have her fill. The build up of nerves, tension and teasing you portray are amazing, it's almost a shame to get to the fucking.

I have to agree the buildup is the best part. The set up of chapter one was my favorite part so far. And in agreement with everyone else, please build the game.

please keep going with this series, it's a fantastic read

Favourite series on the site. Will you please write another one?

I have been waiting for another installment of the perfect game!!! loving it

fantastic story, read it multiple times. Please add more chapters

Would love to play this game with some of my friends.

Past due for another chapter.

Hey man,

I saw on your profile that you are intending to write another chapter soon. This series is without a doubt my favorite on the site. However I feel the first chapter is the best. It captures the "should we shouldn't we" premise perfectly and creates that little bit of tension that really makes it a page turner.

Please keep writing

The best I have ever read.salute to your imagination.

When's the next chapter?

That was soooooooo amazing!

Please make a chapter 4.....Best series on literotica.....100/5 stars!!!!!

The way that you blend erotic fiction with the real world is absolutely outstanding. I think i speak for everyone here when i say: WE NEED MORE!

Great story so far, but hoping you do expand the group to include the older, married couple and possibly others, to add variety to the outlook of the participants and to the action. Your writing style is fantastic.

I must say that your writing style is extremely hot!!! Keep it up! Blackmail Tale and CvsN are ready for more action and emotional twists. And Just a blowjob needs completion. Keep it coming!

Well written. Like 1 and 3 a lot. Any more to come, this makes me really horny.

I love it! (Alex is pretty greedy in this one, don't you think?)

It is near six years. How about more friends and neighbors? Or a campus free for all? Or a married couple's retreat? Or.....?

anyone get this game started yet? i want a link please...!

Just finished reading the series again! Wish I could give you five stars again for each chapter, but not being from Chicago I can't figure out how to do that.

Lots of mis-used words (it's when you should have written its, horde for hoard, lead for led) commas in inappropriate places, and some other irritating distractions, but nobody can criticize your story telling ability. Nicely done!

Too bad this thing took 3 years to finish, and now is 7 years old without the next chapter.

I thought about making such a game myself, thanks for the idea! ;)

Please search your stash for the next chapter of this story.

And: You need someone reading proof of your texts, i can see you are using a dictation software that sometimes has trouble deciding which word to use.

Those little spelling quirks are the only bad thing, the stories are excellent, and your style of telling them is, too.

I love this story - please do not leave it hanging. The existing 6 plus the new couple.

Is there going to be another chapter??

can you please give us next chapter

There really needs to be the chapter with that third pair, for a full 3+5 with the two teens.

Unexpected exploration of unseen characters could be fun too, of course, a M > F company might be interesting.

PLEASE!!!!! Write more chapters!!! Very hot line of stories! I can't wait to read about the next game with delara and frank;) I hope Anne is there to enjoy as well:)

Next chapter, please!

I would like to read more. You always make it a good story tail.

I can see where Cheryl and Denise would start feeling a little neglected considering the gender odds. Dave should have been there.

Fabulous!

Would love it if you were to continue.

Please!!

I am hoping that I would be able to get the cards for this game although I might not be able to achieve the stamina in this series and it would be awesome to play. Hope there's a lot more to come for this series.

Dude ! Super killer story. So fucking sick !!!!

All I can say is more, more, more. I hope u

realize u have a game that u should market

(if u haven’t already)... u r sitting on a

goldmine !!! If u don’t want to market it, I would

love to do just that, and work out a fantastic

share for the both of us. I think it would make

a hell of a lot of money. I haven’t started an

account on literotica yet, but I am going to do

just that. Right now u can reference me as

Dr Bob.

Thank u again ‼️‼️‼️

Amazing story...

When will the next chapter come out? Great Story

Every guy’s dream. That was great.

Been waiting for 12 years man.

Not what I expected- even better!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Next one please so good

Still hoping you'll resume this, the GOR story, and also your gamer goddess ... You pick ... Please?

I’m very disappointed that you didn’t finish this story series. At least the next game with the added couple involved and maybe the two college girls too for added spice.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work!

It seems there is so much sex in these and some of your other stories that after a while it just becomes blah, blah, blah.

the tension of M/F or FF or M/M spins and limited ways to get out of it added a lot ... do you use a pass to avoid a early M/M kiss or save it for something later maybe F has control and rolls 4 minutes to direct M/M etc.. i would leave it in ;) another chapter with added decks or back to the first with more chance of same sex sex please :)

Still following the story, waiting for the next chapter.

I still think you need to actually publish the game... you'll do well with it !

LOL...

Wow this is one of the sexiest stories on Literotica. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

One of my all time favorite stories.