All Comments on 'Two in the Bush Ch. 02'

...for the next chapter, love your way of setting the scene, and managing to show the characters' personalities so well. I find it hard to beleive this is your first. Keep going, please :)

I am completely impressed! This is one of the best stories I have read here yet. Love your writing and all the details. The characters are so like-able and there is a nice mixture of emotions in here. From hot and sexy to sad and sweet. Can't wait for the next installment.

It's hard to find good stories here but I'm so glad I found yours! They are amazing! Erotica and romance at it's best.

I'm really enjoying this story. Very good characters.

And really hot sex.

Two in the Bush is one of my favorite stories, and one I come back to again and again. The characters seem very true to life; even minor characters have distinct personalities. The setting, descriptions and sex all make it easy to get lost in the story. Love it!

loved it! turned me on so much, the sex in the garage was brilliant. keep it up!

Chapter 1 was good, and Chapter 2 was better. Now I'm looking forward to Chapter 3. Good writing, character development, and imagery. Great story.