All Comments on 'Undressed for Success'

Great use of inner thoughts and doubts as well as pleasure. I thought the interactions were convincing. Could have done more with the other models just to add some tortureous moments of pleasure, but overall a good tale and high on the believability scale.

I thought this story was very hot and very well written. I felt like having sexual intercourse when I finished reading it.

Makes you wonder if subconciously our model friend might have envisioned her fate when she wore the forbidden dress of another designer. Excellant idea for a story.

A Green_Gem original... great plot, great story!!!

Your talents amaze me.

Yet another awesome display of your work!!!! ;-)

This was another hot story from a talented woman, who knows how to express her fantasies. I love being on your e-mail notification list, Green Gem, so I know when a new story pops up. Thanks for this one! A real mouth-watering treat!

wonderful...a unique situation, an interesting character, a world untouched by most writers...a premise very well thought out. the sex delivers in a big way. thank you for sharing your talent.

Each time I read one of Green_Gem's stories I am reminded of what a passionate friend meant when she once told me that 'until we made love she thought that only another woman knew how a woman enjoyed being touched.' Green_Gem is an obviously intelligent, articulate woman with a delightfully sensuous mind and the ability to share it in the written word. Each of her stories is a reminder that only a woman truly knows the most sensuous thoughts that dwell in a minds of other women. Fortunately there are women like Green_Gem that can share those thoughts in true "literotica."

Wow. Food and Sex, or should that be Sex and Food. Deliciously wicked, outrageously sexy. Thanks for a great read.

Once again, Green Gems, wonderfully sensuous words have left me extremly excited!

Her stories are like like good sex - soft, warm, wet, tense, excited, funny, then HOT, passionite and finally exploding in a wonderful climax!

Green Gem is truly a great author!

What more can be said?

The talented writing of Green_Gem is beyound my ability to describe. This is one hell of a great writer.

Green Gem has done it again! This has to be one of the most intensely arousing, exquisitely written pieces of sexual prose I have ever read! Imaginative, it builds to a fantastic climax. She makes this reader feel as if he were there!

Fantastic!

Yet another story that showcases her talent well. Anybody can write a storybut to tie in the emotion and bringout the raw underlying energy of erotic behavior takes skill.

Gem does that and then lets that passion simmer and then boil.

Wow...you have an amazing gift and a unique talent. I was hooked on this story from beginning to end.

Great story. The description of the model's thoughts and emotions was well done. The story embodies the idea of public display and humiliation as a turn-on.

It leave me breathless! Wow, all hot & bothered. You're definitely good, green gem.

Made me want to be her, so hot!

Literate, sympathetic, arousing, engaging: now, this is erotica -- and considering how a bukkake in real life is so often so downright mechanical, it's rendered far more beautifully here. Fantastic work, green gem.