All Comments on 'Valentine Surprise'

i loved every part of your story, good job

Loved the story. I hope that you wiil write more like this one, or more chapters.

I loved it, Master! You really should write more.. you're very good :)

I got a little bored with it...... sorry. Same ole..same ole..

VERY NICE! Beautiful writing. Sensual prose. And, best of all, it really could happen. ;-)

Yes that would be a great Valentines day Present

sigh...

Please. Sigh

Any writer that can make a woman cum as she just reads is..........ohhhhh.....hot hot hot. Please write more...

czarinavashti :)

It felt clinical. Like a quick run down. I felt like it was the Reader's Digest of fucking. I need yearning. It was far too peppy for my well-versed palate.

I thought it was great. A big turn on and kinda realistic. well written, concise, leaves the concept to the imagination.