All Comments on 'Valentine's Day'

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Ms. HoneydipMs. Honeydipabout 20 years ago
Cute - but short!

Loved this story - really cute, but I would love to see more - such as when she gets to his place. I like the plot & the way you have a paranormal feel to this romance. To be honest, I can see why you have it in IR, rather than Sci-Fi, however, you could make a case for the ROMANCE category as well (given it's start & lack of sex).

Keep up the great work & hope to see the next installation soon - especially with the "paint"... (sounds deliciously kinky!)

All the best,

Honey

jakkjakkabout 20 years ago
longer please

loved the characters i know it was a start up story but it could have lasted a bit longer still a great start

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Love Twice Over

Some people will have you believe that you can not find love at an early age, I for one beg to differ. Bring more pages per chapter please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I want to slap this woman...and hope that some of her fortune transfers to me as I make contact.

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