All Comments on 'Wolf Lake Ch. 01'

I liked the build up and the anticipation.

Fuck, that's such a hot story!!!!

this is..wow..keep it up

did u know ther was a series on chill tv that is named wolf lake. i loved the story dont change the name it gos perfectly just wanted to let u know they did cansel it tho

that was absolutley amazing. <3

Kinky, but not passionate enough for a werewolves story.

and am now slapping myself for doing so...BAD! PAD GIRL!

Passionate, Suspenseful & Seductive! Different from the 1001 stereotypes here on Lit.

Very imaginative and nice "word painting" but needs basic editing: Misspellings, sentences going no where, basic grammar. With editing, this could be a very good and quite erotic story.

WOW. A little fast paced. things were moving kind of quickly, but I liked it... But I was favoring Roland as her mate... Kind of sad, but I'll get over it

I like this so far! The only thing that strikes me as off is Sam's complete willingness to abandon her life. You made her a very strong, intelligent character and then you have her just throw away everything in 10 seconds (without even knowing what she was getting in to)!

I'm so happy she had a real interest in wolf cock! I'm sick of running into all the forceful and fear based werewolf stories. There's still the boring and overused element of running through the woods... But she wants wolf cock and that gets me going enough that I can look past the other tired and outdated "fight for a woman" trope. We still have the final say, and it doesn't always work out in the winning males favor.

Again, very happy with how much she wanted werewolf dick.

It's totally reasonable for a wild girl to want to run away from the default world. I am one of those types. Adventure!

How is he pinching and pulling her nipples in wolf form? That makes zero sense. Otherwise, enjoying your story!

I have to agree with anon there.

You made her out to be quite intelligent, independent, self sufficient and confident.

but drop everything she had and lived for in an instant, without a reason shown beforehand.

When you made the introduction of her, you could've talked about her being troubled loosing her parents, tough life, stressful life, she uses these trips to get away, get her head clear etc.

So the life changing decision to leave her entire life behind makes a little more sense.

Other than that a very good start.

More please..especially Roland he has taken my imagination by storm..thank you ..looking forward to the next chapter

I agree with previous critics. And how easy it would have been to add some time before she made such a decision.