All Comments on '2010: Indian Son Burning Desire'
by Johndoe7john
- 31 Comments
Anonymousabout 14 years agoRemove this trash. It's totally worthless and the writting is so bad as to be nearly impossible to read. Lacks basic language skills needed to produce a marginal enough story to read.
toJohnny7about 14 years ago. . . and I love the kink! Please keep writing.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI don't know what the poster below is moaning about, the language was fine. Perhaps you were using big words that he couldn't understand.
I would like to read the rest of the story.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI was expecting a 9 inch cock, pecks all over him AND her, beautiful blond, blue eyed females that begin the session with sucking cock and let themselves used (a la porn videos), oversized, rock hard boobs, tight round, (man-like) arses, long legs that go forever, etc, etc. Nothing like that here! Pity you made your characters real! Such a disappointment! ;-))))
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI liked it, very evocative. Oh - and re "remove the trash" from anonymous, I just LOVE comments criticising the "writting" (sic). What a plonker!
Anonymousabout 14 years agotop story. I like the theme behind the story. Sounds like a typical indian family characters. Cant wait for the next part? Are u going to fuck your mother? What about your sister?
Johndoe7johnabout 14 years agoAuthorThanks for all the comments guys. love to hear them whether its good or bad. I would like to hear more comments about my writing and story. It will improve my next part
Any suggestions to the story line?
Who would you want me fuck first and how?
Make love to my sweet mother pussy only
my slutty mother's tight fat ass and then her hairy pussy
my slutty sister tight young cunt and then her ass
Fill my slutty mother's tight fat ass with my warm cum and then get my sister to lick it clean
Maybe a bit of dirty smelly panty sniffing first
Not interested.
ashok6558about 14 years agoPlease make your mom & sis pregnant together on the bed that is shared by your parents. Drink milk. Describe elaborately about how you feel to revisit the place from where you came to this world..............
Anonymousabout 14 years agoThis seems to be a good beginning, but it is only that, a beginning. Please continue your story.
Anonymousover 13 years agoMan If I Was You I Would Be Sniffing Your Mom And Sisters Panties Every Chance I Could.I Bet Their Panties Smell Delicious With Their Sweet Cunt Odors.Try It And Tell Us About Them.Who Smells Better Your Mom Or Your Sister.I Used To Sniff My Moms And My 2 Sisters Panties.I Love My Moms The Best.I Used To Peek at them through a small hole in the bathroom wall.My Mom Had A Nice Voloptuous Body Too.38D and wore XL Panties.I Used To Sniff Them Right After I Watched Her Finish Her Bath.Her Odor Of Her Puss Still Fresh On Them.I`d Find Another To Wrap On My Cock And Cum All Over Them Both.
Anonymousover 13 years agocontinue please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoPls complete that excellent story, why there is not the last page? Pls do the needful
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoPls finish the story, where is the last part?
Pls do the needful............
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI just loved your description of your mother. Excellent first effort. The narrative devices you used were very refreshing and original.fantastic read indeed... You must be freakly and have such a dirty mind to talk about your mother and sister like this. But i loved it...
questmythalmost 12 years agocontinue writing it buddy.It is very hot.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoBest story in a long time. love the lust for the mother. Please continue writing.i have some ideas i will share with u via email. great story
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoCan't wait for more. Love to see my mum taking cock. Or even fuck her myself
Anonymousover 6 years agoReally kinky story, very real Indian family. I got so hard reading this story. Please read and share your thoughts.
