by PassionForPleasure
Why stay together? No love. No respect. Nothing but financial convenience. This is a story of laziness and stupidity. UGH!
But it's cucky, nor abusive.
Not my path, nor yours, but seems to suit them.
Part 7 and the closet cucks are still reading, spanking, and leaving nasty comments.
This seemed to work for this pair of couples, but the question arises why stay married seems pointless.
But you need to work on word usage, grammar, and punctuation. Either use grammar and spell check (Windows Office), some other good word processing software, or a live editor that stayed awake in English class.
3 for trying.
the grammar police. why can't the anon, assholes just read & keep quiet?
what a bunch of pathetic losers, that their life is so worthless they have to autonomously critique to feel their life has meaning .
when you find the first error, just stop reading & move on. you can also reveal your real user names so we can critique your submissions.
there is much more to come. this is a fascinating story. however, i'm shocked they could stay together for 40 years. there is so much that could have gone wrong here.
congrats to you both.
Why stay married they could have just lived together as friends wth benefits.
I may be an asshole, but I'm not anonymous, and as a self-admitted Grammar Nazi, I find that editing errors take me out of the story, sometimes things like misplaced or missing commas make things hard to follow, I have to stop and parse the sentence.
It can also be an indicator of a story's quality. I often read a story, not even noticing errors until I read about them in the comments because I was so into the story, so if I'm noticing errors it's either because they are so egregious that they're hard to miss, or the story is so blah.
Kind of sleazy? Old.folks at a leather party? This is an insult to sleazy.