All Comments on '40 Yrs, In an Open Marriage, Pt. 07'

by PassionForPleasure

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not a marriage

Why stay together? No love. No respect. Nothing but financial convenience. This is a story of laziness and stupidity. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice next chapter

I do enjoy your sexy story.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 6 years ago
Jeez guys lighten up. I get that it's kind of sleazy, and non monogamous

But it's cucky, nor abusive.

Not my path, nor yours, but seems to suit them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
oldswitchhitter is right

Part 7 and the closet cucks are still reading, spanking, and leaving nasty comments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

This seemed to work for this pair of couples, but the question arises why stay married seems pointless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OK story

But you need to work on word usage, grammar, and punctuation. Either use grammar and spell check (Windows Office), some other good word processing software, or a live editor that stayed awake in English class.

3 for trying.

DrGoodOneDrGoodOneabout 6 years ago
Great series

I'm looking forward for another 30+ years of marital bliss

beretta84beretta84about 6 years ago
i do not understand...

the grammar police. why can't the anon, assholes just read & keep quiet?

what a bunch of pathetic losers, that their life is so worthless they have to autonomously critique to feel their life has meaning .

when you find the first error, just stop reading & move on. you can also reveal your real user names so we can critique your submissions.

beretta84beretta84about 6 years ago
i hope...

there is much more to come. this is a fascinating story. however, i'm shocked they could stay together for 40 years. there is so much that could have gone wrong here.

congrats to you both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
40 YRS

Why stay married they could have just lived together as friends wth benefits.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 5 years ago
@beretta84 Re: "I do not understand..."

I may be an asshole, but I'm not anonymous, and as a self-admitted Grammar Nazi, I find that editing errors take me out of the story, sometimes things like misplaced or missing commas make things hard to follow, I have to stop and parse the sentence.

It can also be an indicator of a story's quality. I often read a story, not even noticing errors until I read about them in the comments because I was so into the story, so if I'm noticing errors it's either because they are so egregious that they're hard to miss, or the story is so blah.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
OldBear

Kind of sleazy? Old.folks at a leather party? This is an insult to sleazy.

PassionForPleasurePassionForPleasureover 4 years agoAuthor

26thNC

This took place when I was 24

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