All Comments on 'While He Sleeps'

by katniss93

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
hey

one mistake... you got up and cleaned... a no no ... go to sleep with all of him in YOU

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Well. That was pleasantly unexpected!!! 5/5!

I confess I was expecting to read about a wife cheating in her husband while he was asleep, imagine my surprise when she takes him instead. Thanks for a great story!!!! Next story should be hubby taking her in her sleep!

Richie4110Richie4110almost 10 years ago
A man's dream

The story of the icing on the cake of an ideal, loving relationship. Thanks for a wonderful short erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
liked it very much

5 *

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 10 years ago
No Bull?

Sweetie doesn't have a Bull waiting in the hall, ready to ravage her after Hubby doses off? She is NOT planning to get him enclosed in a male chastity device? Or to humiliate him in ways both blatant and subtle?

Every once in a while, it is nice to see a TLW!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Very nice

5 stars.

IronDragonIronDragonalmost 10 years ago
Wow!

A breath of fresh air in LW with a REAL LW! No cheating sluts, cucks, or wimps in sight!

I love it when my wife wakes me up like this! :D

I'd give you 5 HUGE Stars, but voting seems to be screwed up. Anyhow, great job, and I'll give it a 5 ASAP!

bobby9909bobby9909almost 10 years ago
I wish I could give it a 10

Thank you.

carvohicarvohialmost 10 years ago
All right!

Now that was a loving wife!

Five!

Five!

Five!

Five!

Five!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 10 years ago
Yay

A loving wife who loves her husband. I've never been fucked awake but it sounds fantastic. Great little tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
There is a camera in my room!

When I had read this, l thought were there cameras in my bedroom! You almost catch everything l did with my husband the other night! My husband suck on my breast a lot longer then her husband. This is a great story! It is hot and a turn on for either sex! It felt so real! I ready mean it when I say this had happen to me on multiple time when my husband works late! He does remember it the next day and telling me how bad l was and I needed a spanking! But that is another story!

Good luck with your other stories. This is a 5 stars!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Different

This loving wife stayed home instead of straying. That's different.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I loved it and gave it 5 stars. I wish I could give it more, but sorry I can't at this time. Finally we read about a wife who actually loves her husband, and is willing to have sex with him in their bed together without a 3rd person joining in or other such crap. It's nice to read about a loving wife and not a cheating wife. Thank You for sharing it with us. :-)

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