by SaddleRider
No,no,no. Room for so much expansion/continuation.
Please share more of your fertile mind. (well, in the land you've created).
Mmmmm?
Great start. I hate it when someone has a great story concept base and then make it 100%sex. Thanks!! Love it and you are a skilled writer my friend:)
Ed
Great story, I love how it sucks you into it and makes you see it as it unfolds.
Awesome job, now I have to go read the rest of your work!
Your a very good writer, the story was slightly drawn out at times. While I skipped a few lines here and there as I jumped back in I was compelled to continue on, again extremely well done.
Wow.
Well choreographed and we'll written. A mark above most writers on literotica.
Would love to see background story for Bryana. Her past is discussed often in An Apocalypse Rising and there's so much to tell.