All Comments on 'A Bargain Made Ch. 02'

Would love to see background story for Bryana. Her past is discussed often in An Apocalypse Rising and there's so much to tell.

The beginning of a truly fantastic series.

Thank you for writing it!

Wow.

Well choreographed and we'll written. A mark above most writers on literotica.

Your a very good writer, the story was slightly drawn out at times. While I skipped a few lines here and there as I jumped back in I was compelled to continue on, again extremely well done.

Great story, I love how it sucks you into it and makes you see it as it unfolds.

Awesome job, now I have to go read the rest of your work!

An amazingly put together story! Thank you!

Great start. I hate it when someone has a great story concept base and then make it 100%sex. Thanks!! Love it and you are a skilled writer my friend:)

Ed

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No,no,no. Room for so much expansion/continuation.

Please share more of your fertile mind. (well, in the land you've created).

Mmmmm?