All Comments on 'A "Battle" of Cocks'

story. Great plot, good characters, smooth development, believable, and a perfect twist ending all made for a neat story. The cock contest was neatly handled. Well done.

Entertainment in all respects,hilarious at times.I have been in a few places like these "premises" and had a great time.

What an interesting read!

This is a great, very entertaining story! The description of the cock contest is vivid and evocative, larded with hilarious moments. The Hansel and Gretel part very funny.

The ending is a big, big surprize!

Well done, Harry069. Can't wait to read more from you.

wow! I couldn't put this story down. The cock contest was awesome. You tell a story with such vivid detail, that I could imagine what the whole scene was before my reading eyes. well done!!

This was an excellent story with a great twist at the end. Not only that, it was also funny, serious, entertaining and hot. What more could be asked for?

Millie

This is a great story. Really very creative.

Well written. held my interest and got better as story unfolded. Surprised me at the end.

worth reading and worth reading again too.

not many are that good.

well done. a 5 star for shore

Good story, great humor, cheesy ending though, and unfortunately you could probably improve your writing a bit! X