All Comments on 'A "Battle" of Cocks'

Good story, great humor, cheesy ending though, and unfortunately you could probably improve your writing a bit! X

worth reading and worth reading again too.

not many are that good.

well done. a 5 star for shore

Well written. held my interest and got better as story unfolded. Surprised me at the end.

This is a great story. Really very creative.

This was an excellent story with a great twist at the end. Not only that, it was also funny, serious, entertaining and hot. What more could be asked for?

Millie

wow! I couldn't put this story down. The cock contest was awesome. You tell a story with such vivid detail, that I could imagine what the whole scene was before my reading eyes. well done!!

This is a great, very entertaining story! The description of the cock contest is vivid and evocative, larded with hilarious moments. The Hansel and Gretel part very funny.

The ending is a big, big surprize!

Well done, Harry069. Can't wait to read more from you.

What an interesting read!

Entertainment in all respects,hilarious at times.I have been in a few places like these "premises" and had a great time.

story. Great plot, good characters, smooth development, believable, and a perfect twist ending all made for a neat story. The cock contest was neatly handled. Well done.