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All Comments on 'A Beautiful Day'

by greenfly

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
It could have been much better.

2nd person writing is hard to get used to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Second Person

Although this would be good for cyber-sex...in a story format it was confusing and made it hard to really enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

more back story, tease me more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
mmmmm

I am so fucking wet now

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