All Comments on 'A Birthday Present for Mother Ch. 01'

Need more, more, more... Now, now, now... PLEASE!

Longer chapters. Post quicker. Great job.

Give us more of the story, BUT you got the joke all wrong. It is older than sin, and goes "The nice girl goes to the party, goes home and goes to bed. The good girl goes to the party, goes to bed, and then goes home!" Why? because the good girl is "good" in bed. I think it is still in Joe Miller's "Joke Book" (an old time vaudeville standup comedian.) And remember when writing a story about Doms and Subs, the only thing that is real is change (not death or taxes), and there is always a new Alpha Male, more Alpha than the one you are talking about.

Dammit boy, good story. hope to read chp. 2 tomorrow!!

Fantastic! Next chapters please.

A good storyline and very erotic.

Well written and smooth flowing.

I hope that the author will continue this storyline.

Thanks for the read

I am looking forward to the follow on chapters of this story... One thing do I hope it dosen't get into heavy BDSM but will still remain as a beautiful love story...

No incest sex as such but erotically written. I think that mummy dearest is going to get thoroughly ploughed!

Great story line. Looking forward to see how Ron takes his sexy mom in the next chapter(s). Thank you for writing.

reminded my 19th birthday. but its not like this all, i want shower with mom(48) on birthday. she refuse to do that at first, she is a beautiful typical shy mother of mine who always care of her son. i pleaded "as a birthday gift of adulthood", then she agree but keep some distance in bathroom. she wear a red bra panty in shower with me and me a lycra, wow what god gifted body of her. i feel altime bulge under my lycra and she noted but she never said anything. altime keep distance from me not even a touch with my body.

can't wait to read further chapters. This one was pretty hot for a "no-sex" chapter. The characters were well written. thanks for a great start

Look, when I boy discovers that his own mother's cunt is drooling for what he's got jumping around in his pants, the decent thing to do is to just shove his cock up the beautiful fuckhole he came out of and give his mommy the hot fuck she deserves.

WHERE IN THE HELL IS YOUR STORY - OR WAS THIS A DREAM, NO NIGHTMARE YOU HAD ABOUT YOUR MOMMY/ SIGN OFF FOREVER OR LEARN TO WRITE A STORY. THE ONE STAR I GAVE YOU WAS TO MANY STARS, BUT THERE IS NO ZERO.

Thoroughly enjoyed the opening chapter. The characters have been developed with breadth and depth. Both characters are emotionally mature, accept each other as sexual human beings, have solid egos, have solid ids, and have an indepth knowledge of the rulesand boundaries of a Dom/Sub lifestyle. 5 star beginning.