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manlycactusover 19 years agoA Writer of High Degree
Most remarkable!
I hope you will continue to publish as you explore other
genre. I will be reading as your writing blossoms
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoStarted out strong...
But when you got to the sex part you really rushed it. good intro though. You seem to write with a degree of anger, is that intentional?
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