All Comments on 'A Blackmail Tale Ch. 09'

You tended to get confused with what girl was doing what to who, especially when Krista was getting fucked. Other than that, I love all your stories, this one more than most.

Overall very good, as are the rest of your tales. However, you frequently used Krista's name for Abby's in the hot tub scene.

Very Nice, The plot was nice with few loopholes, but Exceptionally well written.

Is there any more I could read these stories all the time.

I enjoyed the whole lot of the blackmail stories will it contonue or is that it

I would like to ask you to do a bit of editing to clear up the confusion about the girls names.

I'VE ONLY RECENTLY FOUND YOUR STORIES AND YOU'VE QUICKLY BECOME ONE OF MY FAVORITES! HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO ENJOY WRITING. WE'LL CONTINUE TO ENJOY READING. AS FOR THE FEW WHO DON'T ENJOY THESE TALL TALES, PLEASE TELL ME WHAT THEY'RE DOING HERE? YOUR STORIES ARE TIGHT AND A GOOD READ.

this series is wonderful. unfortunately, you need to do some major proofreading of this chapter, one previous chapter, and any future chapters to clear up the character name issues asap. they are quite distracting. you are better than that!

TTT's train of thought has derailed! This story is NOT up to his usual high standards. Having hot sex is all well and good, but how is this part 9? Who the f*ck is Misty? This looks like you swept up the cutting room floor and patched it together for a story.

You can do (and HAVE done)better.

I have really enjoyed reading these so far....and yes I too was a little confused by the name mix ups but still great work :)

I've really enjoyed your story, but the name mixup in the middle of this one messed it up. do they allow rewrites?

By a shit of a mindless "writer" !

he obviously didn't read the others, and besides it's impossible to please everyone:)

these are great.

Best till now in the series.

I've like the chapters so far but this one was a hard read. You used Krista's name in many places you meant Abby. I'm surprised this hasn't been fixed in the last six years. Keep writing. Still loving it.

I love your stories. You seem to keep me on edge through the entire thing. And to those who keep saying he needs to go back and fix the name mix up he can't. Once a story is accepted i have not found a way to change it. I honestly hope you keep writing in this series. On to the next chapter!!!

I think Krista and Abby's names got switched and it made the story hard to follow

The author confused Krista and Abby's names several times in Chp 9.

What a load of crap but guess you gotta get your little weenie off sharing yourself around how about sharing aids too

Great story, mind you, you lost it a bit with the names Abby and Krista mixed up at times. but that's nitpicking. Like I said great story keep it up :-)

Great story apart from the name mix-ups in the middle

What gives? Crossed up Abby's name with Krista a few times. Not up to your usual standards. Still good enough to rate though.

by far this is the best story i have ever read gg dude

The slip ups with the names makes it a bit irritating.

Still good though.

Enjoyed this -- reminded me of fun I've had in an indoor hot tub where we didn't have to worry about noise. I do have to echo the remarks about confusing the names of the women plus grammatical errors, e.g., "than" not "then" which have two very different meanings in that sentence.

Awesome story, read all the chapters so far.

My only grizzle in this one, is the name mix up at the hot tub (a bit of proof reading) but otherwise hot reading.

I would like to sign up for that life. But I realize these stories are only fantasy

I still love the stories, they are such a great fantasy!!

BIT, you are more care less with the writing; name mix-ups, some spelling/grammatical errors...this is REALLY not like you...GET IT TOGETHER, PLEASE!!(Not "man"-your profile does not indicate your sex, so I am not sure how to address that...😨)

"MADDOG IN TEXAS"

excellent so far. sexy and funny at times, good dialogue Think you messed up Krista and Abby's names some at the end of page 1 and beginning of page 2.

You literally have an entire section of conversation where both ppl are Krista for a dozen lines

And the wife comes around with a vengeance!

Fabulous chapter, totally hot. Seems everything is working out in our hero's favor. You seemed to get Abby and Krista mixed up at some point when Abby was making Krista beg for his cock, used Krista's name for both voices, but it happens. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I LOVE this story line! But is there any way you can edit this and re-post? Some names got goobled and a few misspellings. (Please re-read with an editorial eye.) The story runs SOOO much smoother without the hiccups!

You got the girl's names mixed up in the hot tub. A lot. Great series.

You should take better care of the protagonist's names: ' "Tell me your a slut for his big cock," [Abby] Krista urged her, still teasing those big sensitive titties.

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[Abby] Krista reached behind her and pushed me away, holding me just out of reach. She reached her hand around the head of my clock, squeezing it, stopping me from sliding back into our pretty little blonde friend. "Beg for it, you dirty little slut. Beg me for my husband's thick cock. Beg me to let him fuck you," [Abby] Krista growled.

"Oh, God, please [Abby] Krista," she moaned in frustration.

"Say it or I'll let Misty have him," [Abby] Krista warned.

"Please, please let him fuck me. Make him stick that hard dick way up inside me again, please, I'm begging." Krista begged her, convincingly.

[Abby] Krista seemed happy enough with that, and she slid her hand up my shaft, and pulled my cock back into Krista's eager slit. As soon as she let go, I was at it again, fucking her, slowly picking up the pace.'

See what I mean?