All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
???

Romance? She fell prey to and was fucked by an arrogant asshole, she outshines the star, and in his weak mind he blackens her eye. She dumps the dumb fuck and in her new found "confidence" she is with her boss?!?

Romance?

Not on this planet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Agree

Definitely not a romance. Strange story. Is there a page missing?

Sidney43Sidney43about 11 years ago

I really liked this story and am not sure just why. No doubt there is some obscure novel, or film that forms the basis for the story line, but it eludes my feeble mind right now. In any case, glad she realized that being a star was not all it is cracked up to be and Bryce was there to help the return to reality.

bruce22bruce22about 11 years ago
Nice Concept

It would have been worth a bit more polishing. As someone pointed out she failed to convince us that she was not an asshole in development..

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
1ST TIME MEETINGS AND IMPRESSIONS

don't always pan out as directed, TK U MLJ LV NV

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Really nice job

And a fun story about growth and people and the truth within them -

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Dumb bitch MC Renee. HOWEVER, VERY BADLY WRITTEN STORY

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