by queerrev
That one made even my eyes water! What an experience - I don't know whether I would love it or hate it - and I don't suppose I can find out on the NHS. Good story - thank you - five stars.
That was incredible. Written in a sterile, clinical style to suit the story itself. The protagonist seemed so detached... Very artsy and well crafted! Kudos!
Super plot and descriptive prose. Let's see more stories along this or a similar theme.
Loved the voluntary F/f sub control theme! Hopefully you'll consider doing possible follow-on chapters of her next visit(s) that might employ alternative - if not more advanced - techniques. Also you may wish to personalize this wonderful woman a bit as well as broadening the rationale for her erotic needs. Only suggestions - not criticism. Thanks for a great erotic tale!
Love the idea of a clinic where girls can indulge their passion.
What i like especially is that the treatments are strictly f/f and that there are machines involved. I hope for a quick sequel of this fantastic story.
Maybe you can put some more emphasis on anal stretching? Perhaps with a special designed machine?
Thank you very much!