All Comments on 'A Clinical Tale'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
May I make an appointment?

I'm free Tues, Wed and Fri mornings.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
Oh my!

That one made even my eyes water! What an experience - I don't know whether I would love it or hate it - and I don't suppose I can find out on the NHS. Good story - thank you - five stars.

irishkenny1974irishkenny1974about 11 years ago
Wow...

That was incredible. Written in a sterile, clinical style to suit the story itself. The protagonist seemed so detached... Very artsy and well crafted! Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic Effort!

Super plot and descriptive prose. Let's see more stories along this or a similar theme.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wonderful Story!

Loved the voluntary F/f sub control theme! Hopefully you'll consider doing possible follow-on chapters of her next visit(s) that might employ alternative - if not more advanced - techniques. Also you may wish to personalize this wonderful woman a bit as well as broadening the rationale for her erotic needs. Only suggestions - not criticism. Thanks for a great erotic tale!

fantasywriter1fantasywriter1about 11 years ago
Well thought out story

Love the idea of a clinic where girls can indulge their passion.

What i like especially is that the treatments are strictly f/f and that there are machines involved. I hope for a quick sequel of this fantastic story.

Maybe you can put some more emphasis on anal stretching? Perhaps with a special designed machine?

Thank you very much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Can't wait to read about her return visit! Please keep the story going

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I loved the story. Very erotic !

DaddysGoldenGirlDaddysGoldenGirlover 9 years ago
Different

That was definitely different. Well done, I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Really amazing story. Especially because it was voluntary

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Heaven

I,d love to visit this clinic , sounds like heaven!

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