All Comments on 'A Clinical Tale'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Heaven

I,d love to visit this clinic , sounds like heaven!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Really amazing story. Especially because it was voluntary

DaddysGoldenGirlDaddysGoldenGirlover 9 years ago
Different

That was definitely different. Well done, I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I loved the story. Very erotic !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Can't wait to read about her return visit! Please keep the story going

fantasywriter1fantasywriter1about 11 years ago
Well thought out story

Love the idea of a clinic where girls can indulge their passion.

What i like especially is that the treatments are strictly f/f and that there are machines involved. I hope for a quick sequel of this fantastic story.

Maybe you can put some more emphasis on anal stretching? Perhaps with a special designed machine?

Thank you very much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wonderful Story!

Loved the voluntary F/f sub control theme! Hopefully you'll consider doing possible follow-on chapters of her next visit(s) that might employ alternative - if not more advanced - techniques. Also you may wish to personalize this wonderful woman a bit as well as broadening the rationale for her erotic needs. Only suggestions - not criticism. Thanks for a great erotic tale!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic Effort!

Super plot and descriptive prose. Let's see more stories along this or a similar theme.

irishkenny1974irishkenny1974about 11 years ago
Wow...

That was incredible. Written in a sterile, clinical style to suit the story itself. The protagonist seemed so detached... Very artsy and well crafted! Kudos!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
Oh my!

That one made even my eyes water! What an experience - I don't know whether I would love it or hate it - and I don't suppose I can find out on the NHS. Good story - thank you - five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
May I make an appointment?

I'm free Tues, Wed and Fri mornings.

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