All Comments on 'A Cousin's Apartment Ch. 02'

by courage33

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Should have stopped at Chapter 1

I liked chapter 1 but didn't care for this chapter at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Loved it!

Great story, are we going to take in the whole family? Don't forget to edit the dumb stuff like here for her (they are like speed bumps). Also some words were missing. Step back from your story for a week then read it (don't scan it) like you've never seen it before.

stringer60stringer60almost 15 years ago
Great sequel

Really loved it - lived up to the first - looking forward to the 3some they're about to have :)

Keep up the good work and keep them (and me) coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Repitious

Mmkay, good story and all but... You use cock way too much, we get it, it's a cock and it's hard, you don't have to repeat it so much, it kills the story, but still looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
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the typos are to bad

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