by vyasya
you really know how to write a story. the buildup, the anticipation, the mind games...i love it. hope you write the next part soon, i keep checking every day i'm hooked
In my next life i want to be Nishma's uncle-in-law.
Dear vyasya,
when are you going to post your next update. please update quickly.
thanks
Great story and great buildups...When are you going to post the next part? Eagerly awaiting man!
The story is multifaceted.
It is EROTIC.
IF YOU ARE INTO CUCKOLDING STUFF, THIS IS A MUST READ!
vyasya:
You have very successfully penetrated the psyche of a voyeur/cuck-wannabe husband.
The interaction between Nishma & her hubby opens to us the mind of a cuck-wannabe in all its complexities.
Nishma LOVES TO FUCK! She is not a one-man woman but she does love her husband.
Nishma's method of discussion & her penetrative mind are outstanding.
Nishma's character may or may not be unique on Literotica, but it sure is DISTINCT.
Ch. 3 builds the foundation for Ch. 4.
The dialogue between HER & HIM gives the readers a good idea what goes on in a cuck-wannabe's mind.