All Comments on 'A Cuckold by Birth Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
i love it. you are an artist.

you really know how to write a story. the buildup, the anticipation, the mind games...i love it. hope you write the next part soon, i keep checking every day i'm hooked

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
nice.. keep going

looks like a nice story, please continue to write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
☆☆☆☆+ [(4+) 4.4/5.0 = 88%] Ch. 3 is actually a teaser, a sneak-peek at what to expect in Ch. 4

In my next life i want to be Nishma's uncle-in-law.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Dear vyasya,

when are you going to post your next update. please update quickly.

thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What a build up

Great story and great buildups...When are you going to post the next part? Eagerly awaiting man!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I YOTALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER! The story was brilliantly conceived & masterfully crafted. I gave this chapter a 5/5 = 100% = A+

The story is multifaceted.

It is EROTIC.

IF YOU ARE INTO CUCKOLDING STUFF, THIS IS A MUST READ!

vyasya:

You have very successfully penetrated the psyche of a voyeur/cuck-wannabe husband.

The interaction between Nishma & her hubby opens to us the mind of a cuck-wannabe in all its complexities.

Nishma LOVES TO FUCK! She is not a one-man woman but she does love her husband.

Nishma's method of discussion & her penetrative mind are outstanding.

Nishma's character may or may not be unique on Literotica, but it sure is DISTINCT.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What next?

What's next? We are waiting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I like Ch. 3 very much, gave it a 5- (4.6/5.0 = 92%) THE PLOT IS ORIGINAL

Ch. 3 builds the foundation for Ch. 4.

The dialogue between HER & HIM gives the readers a good idea what goes on in a cuck-wannabe's mind.

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