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Click hereShe sat stunned. She felt like she wanted to cry, but no tears streamed down her face. Her stomach churned inside her. "Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God!" she repeated over and over. "What am I going to do now?" Slowly she arose to her feet, letting her back slide its way up the painted block wall. She turned, looking over the parking lot, the numerous cars, trucks, and motorcycles parked all around.
Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder. "Hey bitch," a voice said behind her. "We've been looking for you."
Bailey could only fall to her knees, emotionless, and stoic. She was defeated and exposed, and resigned to her fate. She felt the sensation of pins and needles all across her bare body. She stared at her car as the tow truck slowly carried it down the roadway. "You've caught me," she said sheepishly without looking back. "Now what?"
(I hope you like my little tale. Let me know if you think I should continue with chapter II, and please read my other stories on this site)
I read the story years ago and keep thinking about the idea of putting herself into the compromised situation by her clothes floating back. That self-forced dilemma is such a wonderful idea. And you've done a great job in painting out how the story unfolds and creating a feel for her as a person. This is one of my favorite stories on this site. The finishing touch is that it ends with such an uplifting mood of her claiming her strength by claiming her place among the bikers and watching the sunrise.
More, please...keep her going. Let her escape, then try to find her car
I don't know whether I want her to get cought or not. She is obviously high spirited, yet dumb as a brick for starting all this.