All Comments on 'A Day At The Beach'

by Chir0n

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
If your aim with sprucing up the "true" stuff was to make it fun and interesting...

You failed. Post in gay, maybe they'll like it over there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Your description

was a lie... they didn't get carried away, but they should have... all of them ... never to return again

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
FAGGOT LITERATURE

Women are hardcore sluts and the guys are right up front faggots, actually fucking one another. Not my cup of tea at all and besides, i found this in a BTB category. The only burning in this story is likely to be in everyone getting some sort of crotch rot. I mean, I don't get it. Because they don't know if the guy on the beach is clean they don't let him actually fuck her but they all suck up the spilled cum. That in case you're wondering is where the disease lives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Yikes, this is really a very poor effort. Author, why did bother to submit suck dogshit?

puke

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Bitter ignorant comments

I want to say that all the negative comments posted here show a really sad stereotypical view of human sexuality. Homophobic, narrow minded, macho headed. Comments born out of feeding on a regular diet of "regular porn" as if that is what everyone wants right? Bubblegum air headed blonds and big hunky porno studs. Yawn yawn.

If the "normal" guys who made these comments (and they will all be guys - bone headed Alpha males no doubt) had bothered to read the build up stories from the same author that led to this one, then there would maybe have got the erotic idea of the whole storyline. I personally can't wait to hear how they all get on with that little goth waitress. With s bit of luck she might have a good selection of strap on dicks back in her flat to give an Alpha male from the sports bar a damn good hard rogering while being cheered on by the open minded guys from these stories To the author...Keep up the good work and don't be discouraged by these negative postings

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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fag cuck shit.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Anon "bitter ignorant comments". You called it, twink. But it sure beats the alternative cuckie boys all to hell.

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