All Comments on 'A Day in the Utopia'

If a man wrote this story he needs to grow some,if your a girl boy you really hate men!!

story is good. writing is immature and very sloppy, just like this comment

Liked the concept but grammar needs work.

The premise is very good. The author confused the words 'him" and "her" frequently enough that it slowed down my reading. The insights about controlling males by using their sexuality was insightful.