All Comments on 'A Desperate, Last Night Together'

Shouldn't have liked this. You've done a masterful job of taking Walmart white trash and making them almost sympathetic. Nicely done!

started not to read it , glad i did now ,

Just being poor isn't the main thing in this tale, but being unloved is what I thought was the main focus.

The story has a very believable theme and is well writen. I would like to know what happened to their lives, after he left to go to war.

Thanks for the good story

Heavy stuff, man. Makes you wonder how true this tale actually is. Thanks for the journey.

Certainly well written story - nice description of each character, loneliness and the hurt and the resolve.

Well done...

I just don't get it. I guess it ain't possible for orphan boys to get off on this?

This story shows real talent -- the characters have depth, and the story would have meaning even without the sex. Please keep writing.

You. Know. How. To. Write.

Amazing characterizations. Your ability to capture emotion is beautiful.

Keep writing.

I didn't care much for the obligatory ass-fucking. The mother could have shown her love for her darling baby boy by having him blow his hot young balls up her ever-loving cunt, the same cunt he came out of. Nothing boosts a son's self-confidence and pride like shooting all his creamy semen up that wonderful, warm wet hole between his mother's legs.

It does sound realistic, depressingly so. But who is Grimes?

make another part of this story please

This is a beautiful story. As one who has no problem with mutually consensual incest between emotionally and psychologically mature individuals, I wonder, in real life, how many families would like to have the opportunity as reflected in this story. After so many years have past since the writting of this story, it is a shame the author did not continue this story.