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Anonymousalmost 13 years agocartoon
This totally lacks plot or carachter develpment and has no eroticism at all.
Use your imagination and write it!
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoOy! What about the dinner?
This is really a synopsis rather than a story. It has great potential, but only if the author, writes it as a story ie with scenes, dialogue and description. Otherwise reading it is like watching a film on fast forward.
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