All Comments on 'A European in America'

To anon 5-21-18. You put on there a place so that another site can make money. There is no way the you can make contact with anyone because they don't know who you are. You need to stop wasting peoples time by doing that.

She cheated and then file for divorce? Wasn't it better to have a honest talk with her husband and then if that's what both wanted divorce? Or what she wanted was to be free to fuck around, ending her days alone just with a few friends? Not a believable or even a good story. So you better stick to " Incest/Taboo", "BDSM", "Sci-Fi & Fantasy" or any other category but LW.

She's going to divorce her husband for her cheating and never talk to him about the real reason? How does she think that will make him feel? Not much love there. Besides I thought European women had a much more liberal view on sex than Americans? Why divorce? Not a good ending.

I'm guessing that English isn't your native tongue. I noticed several strange capitalization and punctuation errors.

Also, twenty-two isn't a "tender age" to get a college degree. Most student finish high school at 17 or 18, so 21 or 22 are normal ages to graduate college.

So, she divorces the ONE man she ever truly loved because SHE had one drunken fuck with another man?

she kicked herself out.

him not knowing why will hurt him.... a lot.

she can rationalize doing it for him, but it was to avoid his gaze, and the others she's betrayed.she protected her image, and dignity. it only cost her a marriage, a few friendships, and hurting a man she claims to love. he will for at least 1 year go crazy asking himself, "why?"

So glad you wrote it.

She is european, but in particular scandinavian...The question is: is this how scandinavian think and behave when they cheat? I'm sure it isn't the way most european women think and behave when they cheat...Any real woman would have face her sins and confess...2*

Most women are not that stupid and impetuous. Most teenage boys are not that bold or skilled in seduction. Its not a bad story, just so implausible, bordering on fantasy, that its difficult to take seriously. More of an erotic cartoon than a compelling drama.

a dumb story but still a story. If you read the comments you realise how simple the people who read these stories really are and yes so one of you wizards won't comment on my comment i include myself.

But you were doing a pretty good job of showing some depth to the wife. Then it just hit the wall and ended. Keep going, thanks for sharing

Same old, same old, horny younger wife wants younger guy because older husband slowing down. Cowardly slut couldn't even talk to husband, just leave him wondering what he possibly could have done wrong.

Then you pissed on it and flushed it without trying when things got difficult. good writer gets out of the crisis' he or she builds, intentionally or unintentionally.

They barely ever give anything above 2 stars to a story involving infidelity. Sure this was a little on the short side but you did paint quite a good picture before the rushed conclusion.

No guy is going to give up a piece of married pussy after getting it once, even if she rejects him, he'll try once more to seduce her.

Just a mere snapshot of her life, no emotion, no real story. Seemed hurried at the end.

Marked according.

If you tell someone you are ignoring them, you are not ignoring them.

Also you might think about who is the asshole!

LOL, reminds me of the commenter who posted a comment to tell me nobody wanted to have a dialog with me!

I see your stories were 1-bombed. It all comes from one religious retard pretending to be a crowd of hundreds. He posts multiple votes and comments from "Anonymous" or fake bios under the handles

26thNC, Harry inVA, Lakeeriegoatguy, KittyCampbell, Mattenw, ShadowRosie, WarGamer, iameasel, Impo_58, Impo_61, Impo_64 etc., also possbly Rw43, Odiouser and Patillie among others.

This person votes multiple 5's to put a mediocre author in hall of fame for his revenge stories cutting off nuts etc., and gushes over these stories with comments like a sissy cuck wannabe. Then he 1-bomb's any good stories that express sexuality or cheating.

You will find repetitive comments from this person across 50% of the writers/stories in the LW category - "idiot", "garbage", "sewer", "fag", "worst writing" etc. - how can they all be the worst stories or worst writing?

In one of the bios and comments this person claims he was cucked twice but I suspect he never had sex with a woman at all and his comments express a lot of anger towards women, calling them garbage cans.

By the way, this person is a Trumpite running the same play book as Trump and his child molester fakes like Matt Gaetz - they claim to represent 90% of the people as a "majority" but it is just one person trying to destroy the world.

You can argue whether Trump is a cheat and a liar, a Russian agent or led a revolt, but one thing for sure: this Trumpite tried to dump all over your story. I would not have characterized myself as a Democratic voter, but for the next couple of elections I will vote against all the Republicans. That's the best way to vote where it makes a difference.

Wow. I am impressed.

😂💪👏👏

Anonymous denunciation.

How brave.

Have a nice day.

I love your writing and appreciate the chances you take.

BTW, I love Trump (see a few comments down), because he loves America.

Bet you never thought your comments section would become a blog!