All Comments on 'A Family Affair Ch. 01'

some where there somebody telling writer to not finish there work and write it in serial cliffhangers.it sucks and make the writer look stupid.thank you for finishing your work with understanding.and its good writing too.

It's nice to read a story occasionally about someone getting back at a blackmailer. Ususally these stories have the victim so tied up in distress, they can't do anything. Thank you for the time and effort it took in writing this story.

Nice work and it was good - no - really fair to see the jerk abused for once - all this and two hero's!

Your talent here is appreciated - Thanks with Regard

keep up the work

So don't listen to comments from fetish lovers who don't understand revenge when something like this happens to a woman. Great job.

Great Story!!

Not bad at all, there Mr Author! Definitely decent choices made utilizing somewhat obscure words in American English! The husband of the wife, Debby

taking part in the revenge against the pudgy, oompah loompa looking, rapist bastard, that I did not expect!! Speaking for me, i am not gay nor bi, but the way the author slipped that set up situation into Debs revenge movie! I do not know any straight guys that would do near anything to protect their wives and lives, placing their own life between the woman, women, and family said straight guy would make his family suffer at the hands of a rapist cause hubby is skeered of a little bit of that Man Love Thursday.