All Comments on 'A First For Us Both Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good but

good but you need an editor you used a lot of the wrong words they were spelled right but wrongly used please find an editor before posting any more stories and maybe do a rewrite of this series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
HOT STORY

Wow! Its dick erecting story.... I love incest sex with my sister. I am always think about sex with her. She is 19 years old . She is very beautiful. but i don't got any chance to fullfil my desires...

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 3 years ago
4 stars

Story was pretty good but some errors in word usage here and there and just pace of the story.

Rancher46Rancher46almost 2 years ago

Story is getting better. 4/5

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I love to roleplay, open to multiple roles and experiences so long as it’s detailed and takes time to build. Please don’t bother if you aren’t really into a good rp scene.

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