All Comments on 'A First Salty Taste Of Cum'

Tense lead-up, nice result. A penis loves to be in a good mouth.

Tense and Very descriptive, nice build up but climax over to quick. (And in the end...)

When readers wish your story was longer you know you've done a good job. Well done.

that some readers may find the climax I this story a little abrupt. What I was attempting to do was give a real account of a true incident which was exciting, surprising but not an every which way 3 hour sexual encounter. For now, my stories are drawn from life and my first tentative explorations with sex with men. All of them were hot, but none of them were perfect. I wouldn't expect everyone to find what they want in them. But glad people have found them tense, and I appreciate all honest comments.

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Very similar to events I have experienced. Can't wait to read more!

I had 2 attempts before, both cocks were pulled away and didn't cum in my mouth. what was I doing wrong. I thought about what I liked, hoping another cock would come through the hole. Nothing, I went out and watched, a short indian guy in a suit, maybe thirties entered the booth. I waited, then went in to the booth next to his, I put a coin in the slot, waited, my finger at the holes entrance, a short brown cock came through. I stroked it, then knelt and covered it with my mouth, I stayed still as he moved back and forward, moving my tongue, I felt him get harder, then he pulled back, no, no, what the fuck was I doing wrong. His finger appeared at the hole, oh, o.k, I eased my cock through, mmm, warm mouth, I moved back and forward, hard, oh well, at least I get to cum. His mouth left my cock, I waited, he had his cock against mine, stroking them both, I pulled back, his cock followed, I knelt again, this time I moved, back and forward, my tongue working, then I felt it, pulse, another, I moved my tongue around the head. I was rewarded as cum shot into my mouth, warm, slightly salty, I swallowed as more entered my mouth, my first, I loved it. He moved away, I stood, I was rock hard, I felt great, then his finger came through the hole, oh yes, o.k, I pushed it through, the warm mouth, oh yes,then he moved his mouth away, holding my cock, I nearly moved back but I felt it, slippery, warm against the head of my cock, held, I pushed, he held me, then he pushed back, my cock felt like it was going to be broken, then he opened and I knew I had entered his arse, tight, hot, slippery and he kept pushing back until I was all the way in. I couldn't help it, I just fucked, slowly at first, a warm hole, open for me and I didn't disappoint, my cum depositing deep inside him as I fucked faster. He stayed until I pulled out, I was done, I began to clean up, his cock came back through the hole, hard, I stroked it, then knelt again and only had time to get my mouth around it before I felt the trickle of cum, I lapped it up. My first taste, I wont forget it.

Loved the story. Need to find MY FIRST TASTE. Hope it will be a "mutual" satisfaction where we both get to SWALLOW.