All Comments on 'A Fly on the Wall'

Well-written, and I might add, well-edited, this was a great story. Enjoyed every bit of it.

Now planning to read some of your other stories.

How about a sequel?

How about a sequel?

Very yummy and very hot too! I hope you’ll follow this up with another chapter! Thank you!

One Hot story that calls for another chapter. Thanks

That was hot! They need to get married and make babies. This could easily go on for several chapters...and should. Don't leave us hanging.

This strikes me as your best effort yet, from how their flirtation progressed, to how you handled edging out the dad and explaining his brain cancer, to having her be this REAL vixen (a former stripper) that turned into an ultra-loving woman just for him.

I can't recall a story yet where the step-mom was a stripper-turned-honest-lady and she really never let on except for the show when he had his camera in the flowerpot. You made this a very slow-burn and tender progression. I would love to read another installment. 5

I loved this, well written, erotic. Sexy. So good.

Well written and very erotic story. Made for a fantastic read